Thursday 8 January 2015

22. Plot storyline ideas - By Jack

Our film title - The Juvenile Massacre



The film centres around your everyday bloodthirsty teenage psychopath. Upon killing yet another classmate, he doesn't know that there was a witness at the scene. He is threatened by the witness and is forced to do his bidding. However, the main character finds out ho he is and kills him. However is caught by yet another witness. The line goes on and on until they are all caught and charged for murder and with-holding information.


Our idea is that we have a main character, who has a taste for blood. He sees that an unsuspecting classmate is going to take a smoke break in a secluded area, the school boiler/janitor room. Perfect for our main character. He follows him into the room whilst monologuing to the audience about his top 5 favourite movie kill scenes. The camera follows the characters but stops at the door. He says to the victim 'You know, smoking can kill ya'. The door isn't completely closed and we see him stab him. Even though the victim screams, no one else hears it happen. The main character breaks the fourth wall by saying to the camera 'this may take a while' and shuts the door, and a brief time lapse ensues. The main character comes out of the room, with his hands and shirt covered in blood. Since everyone in the school is in class, no one sees him. He changes his shirt and cleans his hands in another room, then goes back into the boiler/janitor room, while still monologuing. After he goes in the room, a person walks past the camera, not seeing him, acting as a transition. Between cuts, a short amount of time has passed and the main character walks out of the room with a body bag and exits the building as the school bell rings and people start leaving their class rooms.

The majority of the scene will look as if it was done in one shot, however time has passed between every time he goes in and comes out of a room.


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