Here is the second rough draft of the sequence. Our teacher has given us a few things to change.
-Fade to black a the end before the bell sounds
-Start the sequence with a close up/POV shot of Tim's character starting the drawing of the stick people
-Make the shot of Charlie's character a little shorter
-Make the shot of Charlie's character getting the cigarettes shorter
-Make the intro to the top 5 horror kills a match cut
-Automation on that same shot (make the audio louder as Tim walks further from the camera)
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