I went on to my progress to see how well I am doing so far
with the blogging tasks:
This is what my teacher said.:
There is some good work here Tim with evidence of real
potential with this aspect of the coursework. However, there is a reliance on
group posts with very few individual posts, which makes it hard to distinguish
your work and contribution from the other group members - and means that there
is little differentiation in my feedback to you and Charlie. Nevertheless,
there is some good work here so please can you consider my feedback regarding
strengths and less strong aspects of your current blog and then complete the to
do list at the bottom of the page. If you can do this, I expect your mark and
grade to increase considerably. well
done!
strengths:
- mostly up to date
- some detail in your work
- evidence of some nice research into genre and titles
less strong:
- some gaps where tasks are missing
- presentation of photos - you need to use an app to present
these more creatively (photobucket, gif etc...)
- frequency of posting is inconsistent
- mostly group posts - only 1 individual post
to do:
1. complete all research blog tasks as we move into planning
2. improve and maintain frequency of posting at least 3 x
weekly
3. think of creative ways to present work using a range of
ICT
4. make sure all the blog post titles relate to the actual
task e.g. your task 6 doesn't correspond with task 6 on the blog check list
5. try to complete more individual posts so we can see your
own engagement and contribution
The improvements that I will make to my work include using a better range of ICT and do more independent posts as I have done mainly groups posts
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